Surrendering sounds too easy –
To just give in – once again –
And believe the fallacies – the pretenses
for all eternity –
To hope beyond measure that this time
the words are pure
that tenderness will take flight and fare
for the better
that not one will break the bond of innocence
when love believes that hope will sustain
and bridge eternity for a moment such as this.

Today’s poetry challenge suggested the prompt “surrender,” written in free verse.

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This struck me:
“To hope beyond measure that this time
the words are pure…”
Thank you. xoA
Thank you so much.
Beautifully said… I had cause to read it a couple times for the true message to sink in. Thank you for posting this lovely piece.
Thank you for your kind words…I am glad that you enjoyed it.